diction

So at the begining of the week I was at my soccer game and I was like yo Mallory we be playin them tiny girls. An she was like yo Britney we be kickin butt today, an then at the end of the game we finished the season undefeated an our coach was like yo girls we be doin so good this year we gonna have a real rad practice soon, when he was done talkin we all got out theses cans of silly string an like sprayed him all over an got our pictures taken together it was so rad.
 
  Then Emily was like yo guys I got all these cupcakes left who wants em. So I ran up and took on an like smeared the frosting all over my coaches face it was really funny, we had a great time and we cant wait till next year,  Clara said me her  and Mallory are going to do gymnastics and do like cartwheels an stuff its gonna be rad, then we all went home. and I like told my sister all about it an she was all shut up dude I dont care she's really mean, oh well so yeah that was a really rad day.
 Peace.

extending the theme

So I over looked a few other blogs before writing my own this time, I think I agree the most with gubanator, I really liked the different relationships throughout the story, Atticus and Scout had a great bond as father and daughter I think I would like to have a more mature relationship like that with my own father. What I mean by that is Atticus didnt treat Scout as his daughter as much as he treated her as her own person he kinda let her figure things out on her own and make mistakes but he also helped her learn from them as well just in a more descreate way I guess.

extra credit.

I think the writing assignment im most proud of, is the ones I finish. sounds weird but i struggle alot with writing so when I turn a writing assignment in completed im proud of myself. There was one project i did in 7th grade, Mr. Haeffer's social studies class I had been getting 6 or 7 out of 10 all year on my writing assignments so I thought I'd start a week early on one and really put 110percent into it. So I turned it in thinking well maybe i'll get the usual 7 out of 10, but when Mr.Haeffer brought me my paper it said " WOW AWESOME JOB!" it's still on my fridge right now.