disscusion

What I found interseting during the disscusions would be how everyone had their own different view of understanding the poem, each time an other person would speak they had something different that they thought about a line in the poem and everyone around would share a different oppinion about the same line. Each person just dug deeper and deeper into the poem to find new levels of meaning it was really cool. I think hearing everyone esles oppinions and thoughts on the poem gave me a new perspective I now understand the peice in more depth, and have a better level of the meaning.

 

5 part paragraph

We all know how much time and effort everyone put into creating their 5 part paragraphs, they took a long time to get exact and they still werent all the way perfect we all have small aspects of our papers that we can work on. I think our biggest weakness as a whole class would be either the comentary or the plot summary. We all seemed to embed our quotes really well and chose or quotes precicely.

  I think as an individual writer I could work on my word choice and choosing my quotes carefully to fit my topic and have it make sense. When I get writing usually it just poors out, if I know what im talking about, but when im confused on what to put where it doesnt always come out sounding very good.

diction

So at the begining of the week I was at my soccer game and I was like yo Mallory we be playin them tiny girls. An she was like yo Britney we be kickin butt today, an then at the end of the game we finished the season undefeated an our coach was like yo girls we be doin so good this year we gonna have a real rad practice soon, when he was done talkin we all got out theses cans of silly string an like sprayed him all over an got our pictures taken together it was so rad.
 
  Then Emily was like yo guys I got all these cupcakes left who wants em. So I ran up and took on an like smeared the frosting all over my coaches face it was really funny, we had a great time and we cant wait till next year,  Clara said me her  and Mallory are going to do gymnastics and do like cartwheels an stuff its gonna be rad, then we all went home. and I like told my sister all about it an she was all shut up dude I dont care she's really mean, oh well so yeah that was a really rad day.
 Peace.

extending the theme

So I over looked a few other blogs before writing my own this time, I think I agree the most with gubanator, I really liked the different relationships throughout the story, Atticus and Scout had a great bond as father and daughter I think I would like to have a more mature relationship like that with my own father. What I mean by that is Atticus didnt treat Scout as his daughter as much as he treated her as her own person he kinda let her figure things out on her own and make mistakes but he also helped her learn from them as well just in a more descreate way I guess.

extra credit.

I think the writing assignment im most proud of, is the ones I finish. sounds weird but i struggle alot with writing so when I turn a writing assignment in completed im proud of myself. There was one project i did in 7th grade, Mr. Haeffer's social studies class I had been getting 6 or 7 out of 10 all year on my writing assignments so I thought I'd start a week early on one and really put 110percent into it. So I turned it in thinking well maybe i'll get the usual 7 out of 10, but when Mr.Haeffer brought me my paper it said " WOW AWESOME JOB!" it's still on my fridge right now.

Intro.

It's hard to think of myself as a writter, it's never been my strong suit but I have alwasys strived to get better at it. So by the end of this year I hope to have accomplished that. As a reader if I enjoy the book I read very quickly and comprehend very well I have a great memory. Followers of my blogg should exspect a different spice to writing, I like to keep things interesting and fun. I beleive I can enlighten the world wide web with my unique writing about literature that we learn in class, after all everyone has a different aspect on the way they learn and comprehend what they learned as well.
 I hope you enjoy reading my blogs through out the year. (: