Monday, November 1, 2010

5 part paragraph

We all know how much time and effort everyone put into creating their 5 part paragraphs, they took a long time to get exact and they still werent all the way perfect we all have small aspects of our papers that we can work on. I think our biggest weakness as a whole class would be either the comentary or the plot summary. We all seemed to embed our quotes really well and chose or quotes precicely.

  I think as an individual writer I could work on my word choice and choosing my quotes carefully to fit my topic and have it make sense. When I get writing usually it just poors out, if I know what im talking about, but when im confused on what to put where it doesnt always come out sounding very good.

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