disscusion

What I found interseting during the disscusions would be how everyone had their own different view of understanding the poem, each time an other person would speak they had something different that they thought about a line in the poem and everyone around would share a different oppinion about the same line. Each person just dug deeper and deeper into the poem to find new levels of meaning it was really cool. I think hearing everyone esles oppinions and thoughts on the poem gave me a new perspective I now understand the peice in more depth, and have a better level of the meaning.

 

5 part paragraph

We all know how much time and effort everyone put into creating their 5 part paragraphs, they took a long time to get exact and they still werent all the way perfect we all have small aspects of our papers that we can work on. I think our biggest weakness as a whole class would be either the comentary or the plot summary. We all seemed to embed our quotes really well and chose or quotes precicely.

  I think as an individual writer I could work on my word choice and choosing my quotes carefully to fit my topic and have it make sense. When I get writing usually it just poors out, if I know what im talking about, but when im confused on what to put where it doesnt always come out sounding very good.